lauanagranair escreveu:Hey guys! This is a text that I wrote to practice for the toefl writing section. Here it is (the context doesn't matter, I just want to check the grammar and the answer template):
"The lecture and the reading concern the status of Pluto as a planet [...], a fact the astronomy community does not agree 100% with.
Undoubtedly the reading regards Pluto as a dwarf planet, but the lecture [strongly] objects to it. They hold different perspectives.
First of all, the reading states that Pluto changed its status after the astronomy community voted to consider it as a dwarf planet instead of a real planet. On the other hand, the lecutre notes that [a large] part of the astronomy community voted favorably for it. All over the world, however, many people disagree with this decision. As per the lecture's viewpoint, astronomers do not regard it as a fair decision."
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