Correção de texto "Jenifer is a student. She is an excelent"

BOA TARDE PESSOAL TENHO QUE ENTREGAR UM TEXTO NO SABADO E ESTOU COM ALGUMAS DUVIDAS SOBRE A GRAMATICA, GOSTARIA QUE ME AJUDASSEM COM A CORREÇÃO.
SEGUE EBAIXO O TEXO

jenifer is a student. she is an excelente person. she has a two brothers. the mother is a housewife and the father is a doctor. jenifer studies veterinary medicine at university from sao paulo, at usp. in the morning jenifer gets up at six o´clock, she leaves school at seven o´clock. she has lunch at midday in restaurant of university, and leaves university at half past five. she likes listens to music and watches movies. she has dinner at a quarte past seven. she likes reads before bedtime. she goes to bed at half past eleven.

FICO NO AGUARDO
ATT
ALINE
MENSAGEM PATROCINADA Para aprender mais sobre os Tempos Verbais baixe agora o: Guia Grátis de Tempos Verbais em Inglês. Ele contém um resumo bem estruturado para revisar os conceitos que você aprendeu na escola.

Clique aqui e saiba como baixar!
Avatar do usuário Flavia.lm 3885 1 9 86
Minha tentativa:

Jenifer is a student. She is an excelente person. She has two brothers. Her mother is a housewife and her father is a doctor. Jenifer studies veterinary medicine at University Sao Paulo - USP. Jenifer gets up at six o'clock and leaves for school at seven o'clock. She has lunch at midday in a restaurant of the university and leaves university at half past five. She likes to listen to music and to watch movies. She has dinner at a quarter past seven. She likes to read before bedtime. She goes to bed at half past eleven.
Avatar do usuário Daniel.S 575 1 2 5
* excellent ou até mesmo outstanding
nine2010 escreveu: she leaves school at seven o´clock.

Flavia.lm escreveu:Minha tentativa:

... leaves for school at seven o'clock.


She leaves school at seven o'clock (Ela sai da escola as 7h)
She leaves for school at seven o'clock. (Ela sai para escola as 7h)