Correção de texto "Living in Massachusetts"

Massachusetts, 04-12-2008

Hi, Cahatarine
I'm wtring this letter for a say on the news. I'm living in the Massachusetts. This is a beautiful city. I like walk for at the park. There is a tree sinester. Well, I continue single and I am studying in the MIT. MIT is a fabulous university, all is perfect. humm. The food is a very healthy. My english is as better as I. Please, sent a answer If receive the my letter. I look forward your answer.

Hugs,
Alex

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Hi, Cahatarine
I'm writing this letter to give you some news. I'm living in Massachusetts. This is a beautiful city. I like to walk at the park. There are beautiful trees. Well, I'm still single and I am studying in the MIT. MIT is a fabulous university. Everything is perfect. The food is healthy. My English is as better as I am. Please send an answer if you receive my letter. I look forward to your answer.