Bom esse foi literalmente o meu primeiro texto em inglês, gostaria da avaliação de vocês no que venho errando para que possa corrigir os meus erros e melhorar o meu "Learning English". Thanks a lot.
I'll try to forget you, because I see your sadist rage and it's not confortable... My world is broken when you say : no! You kidding with me? I'd was very happy as your have invited me to party, and miraculouse you destroy my dreams as a earthquake! I can't smille again , because you took off it me. But I don't lose the control ... Maybe I should, but I could not help think in your crying face, and It's as freezing it in my actions. Because I Love you... And it's my sin.