Correção de texto: Memorable wedding
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Memorable wedding
The prayer started the service giving us a summary about the sequence of the cerimony. Next, the groomsmen, bridesmaids, groom and bride came according to the traditional order. Then, the prayer read a passage from the bible choosed by the couple and talk about their good testimony. After that, the couple declared their fidelity to each other and the prayer sealed the marriage. So, the groomsmen and bridesmaids congratulated the couple and left the church. Finally, the couple left the church on rice fell.
The prayer started the service giving us a summary about the sequence of the cerimony. Next, the groomsmen, bridesmaids, groom and bride came according to the traditional order. Then, the prayer read a passage from the bible choosed by the couple and talk about their good testimony. After that, the couple declared their fidelity to each other and the prayer sealed the marriage. So, the groomsmen and bridesmaids congratulated the couple and left the church. Finally, the couple left the church on rice fell.
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The priest started the service giving us a summary about the sequence of the ceremony. Next, the groomsmen, bridesmaids, groom and bride came according to the traditional order. Then, the priest read a passage from the Bible chosen by the couple and talked about their good testimony. After that, the couple declared their fidelity to each other and the priest sealed the marriage. So, the groomsmen and bridesmaids congratulated the couple and left the church. Finally, the couple left the church under a shower of rice.
The priest started the service giving us a summary about the sequence of the ceremony. Next, the groomsmen, bridesmaids, groom and bride came according to the traditional order. Then, the priest read a passage from the Bible chosen by the couple and talked about their good testimony. After that, the couple declared their fidelity to each other and the priest sealed the marriage. So, the groomsmen and bridesmaids congratulated the couple and left the church. Finally, the couple left the church under a shower of rice.