Correção de texto: Minha biografia

i was born in Belford roxo on july 2nd, 1996. in 2002 started studying on monteiro lobato school, i studied in this school during 9 years. After in 2011 i started studying on dom Adriano hipólito school and in CNA course, i studied in dom adriano school during 3 years when i finished my hight school. in 2014 i started a technical course of informatics for internet in estácio de sá university, i studied in in estácio de sá university during 2 years when i finish my technical course. now in 2016 i start my college on unicarioca university i'm doing a journalism course.

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I was born in Berford Roxo on July 2, 1996. In 2002 I started studying AT THE Monteiro Lobato school, I studied AT this school FOR 9 years, after THAT in 2011 I started studying AT THE Dom Adriano Hipólito school, AT THE SAME TIME I STARTED AN ENGLISH COURSE AT THE CNA, I FINISHED MY HIGH SCHOOL AT THE Dom Adriano school, WHERE I STUDIED FOR 3 YEARS.
In 2004 I started AN (INFORMATICS/COMPUTER/IT) TECHNICIAN ONLINE COURSE AT THE Estácio de Sá University, I studied there for 2 years TILL I FINISHED IT. Now in 2016, I STARTED my college AT THE Unicarioca University, WHERE I´m MAJORING/GRADUATING IN jornalism.