Correção de texto: minha família
- Renan Santos Gomes
- Localização: Santo André, Brazil
- Membro desde: 05 Set 2013, 21:53
- Perfil · 6 Mensagens
Please, correct this text for me.
In my home have three peoples. I, my wife and her brother.
My name is Renan and my birthday is July twenty-third.
My wife´s name is Maria, her birthday is October twenty-fourth.
My brother-in-law´s name is Fabiano, his birthday is August twenty-sixth.
Thanks,
In my home have three peoples. I, my wife and her brother.
My name is Renan and my birthday is July twenty-third.
My wife´s name is Maria, her birthday is October twenty-fourth.
My brother-in-law´s name is Fabiano, his birthday is August twenty-sixth.
Thanks,
TESTE DE VOCABULÁRIO
1 resposta
Resposta mais votada
- PPAULO
- Localização: Rio de Janeiro-Brazil
- Membro desde: 21 Fev 2013, 23:49
- Perfil · 76.1k Pontos · 15k Mensagens
I have a small family/my family is a small family of three. I, my wife and her brother (or a brother-in-law instead of her brother -have the same effect, though.)
My name is Renan and my birthday is on July twenty-third (or written “on July, 23.”).
My wife´s name is Maria, and her birthday is on October twenty-fourth (ditto here).
My brother-in-law´s name is Fabiano, his birthday is on August twenty-sixth.
Let´s wait more comments.
Overall, your piece of text was good.
My name is Renan and my birthday is on July twenty-third (or written “on July, 23.”).
My wife´s name is Maria, and her birthday is on October twenty-fourth (ditto here).
My brother-in-law´s name is Fabiano, his birthday is on August twenty-sixth.
Let´s wait more comments.
Overall, your piece of text was good.