Correção de texto: My biggest dream is to be a doctor
- denisjsilvan
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Pessoal, tô participando de um programa que concede bolsa de estudos nos EUA para brasileiros, já passei na primeira fase, na segunda ele pede que façamos um vídeo de 2 minutos, em inglês, respondendo essas perguntas:
TASK 1- You will make a video with no more than 2 minutes answering the following questions:
A- What are your intended areas of study and why?
B- What will the experience of being an undergraduate student in the U.S. Bring to your career and personal life? Please give us examples for the short term and long term.
Minha resposta vai ser essa abaixo, vcs poderiam me dizer se tem alguém erro na gramática, alguma parte que posso melhorar, etc? Agradeço desde já.
My biggest dream is to be a doctor, that's one thing that I can't explain so well, it's one thing that comes from inside of me. But, I know that is almost impossible to take this course in another county. Therefore, my intended areas of study are law and business, because I like to keep in direct touch with people, talking to them, debating with them, listening to them ideas and expressing to them mine's. I can see me doing exactly that in the future and when I start thinking about it I get really excited.
In my opinion, studying in another country gives us a big bag of experiences and a lot of knowledge, no counting those ones that we've got in Brazil. Besides, It can open numerous opportunities of employment for us in Brazil or worldwide because of the different method of teaching and learning.
TASK 1- You will make a video with no more than 2 minutes answering the following questions:
A- What are your intended areas of study and why?
B- What will the experience of being an undergraduate student in the U.S. Bring to your career and personal life? Please give us examples for the short term and long term.
Minha resposta vai ser essa abaixo, vcs poderiam me dizer se tem alguém erro na gramática, alguma parte que posso melhorar, etc? Agradeço desde já.
My biggest dream is to be a doctor, that's one thing that I can't explain so well, it's one thing that comes from inside of me. But, I know that is almost impossible to take this course in another county. Therefore, my intended areas of study are law and business, because I like to keep in direct touch with people, talking to them, debating with them, listening to them ideas and expressing to them mine's. I can see me doing exactly that in the future and when I start thinking about it I get really excited.
In my opinion, studying in another country gives us a big bag of experiences and a lot of knowledge, no counting those ones that we've got in Brazil. Besides, It can open numerous opportunities of employment for us in Brazil or worldwide because of the different method of teaching and learning.
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- adriano78
- Localização: Volta Redonda, Brazil
- Membro desde: 05 Fev 2012, 12:48
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...listening to THEIR ideas and expressing to them MINE...
- denisjsilvan
- Membro desde: 29 Jan 2017, 15:34
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De resto posso deixar como estar?adriano78 escreveu:...listening to THEIR ideas and expressing to them MINE...
Obrigado!
- Donay Mendonça
- Professor de inglês com 20 anos de experiência.
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Bons estudos.My biggest dream is to be a doctor, that's one thing that I can't explain so well. It's something that comes from inside of me. But I know that is almost impossible to study medicine in another country. Therefore my intended areas of study are law and business, because I like to be in contact with other people, talk to them, discuss with them, listen to their ideas and tell them mine as well. I can see myself doing exactly that in the future and whenever I think about it I get really excited.
In my opinion, studying in another country gives you a lot of knowledge and experience. Besides, it can open doors for employment worldwide because of the different methods of teaching and learning.