Correção de Texto: My dream house
- draylson
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My dream house
My dream house is not a big one. Instead, it is small, cozy and has space enough to live comfortable. It has a backyard where I can grown some fruits and vegetables, as well as a barbecue area where I can receive friends and family. Also, it is a two story house, placed on a high hill, and it has a balcony with sight for the downtown and its high buildings.
My dream house is not a big one. Instead, it is small, cozy and has space enough to live comfortable. It has a backyard where I can grown some fruits and vegetables, as well as a barbecue area where I can receive friends and family. Also, it is a two story house, placed on a high hill, and it has a balcony with sight for the downtown and its high buildings.
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Draylson, my corrections are shown below:
My dream house is not a big one. Instead, it is small and cosy, with space enough to live comfortably. It has a backyard where I can grow some fruits and vegetables, as well as a barbecue area where I can receive friends and family. Also, it is a two-storey house, situated / located / built on a high hill, and it has a balcony with a downtown / town centre view and its high buildings.
My dream house is not a big one. Instead, it is small and cosy, with space enough to live comfortably. It has a backyard where I can grow some fruits and vegetables, as well as a barbecue area where I can receive friends and family. Also, it is a two-storey house, situated / located / built on a high hill, and it has a balcony with a downtown / town centre view and its high buildings.