Correção de texto: My father used to tell me
My father used to tell me
I have friend who is in a bad situation. He spends months trying to get a job. When he get one, he have to work long hours for a misery salary. Last week he said me: "My father used to tell me that I should study to have a good life. Now I know that he was right".
I have friend who is in a bad situation. He spends months trying to get a job. When he get one, he have to work long hours for a misery salary. Last week he said me: "My father used to tell me that I should study to have a good life. Now I know that he was right".
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My father used to tell me
I have a friend who is in a bad situation. He had spent months trying to get a job. When he finally got one, he would have to work long hours for a miserable salary. Last week he said to me: "My father used to tell me that I should study to have a good life. Now I know that he was right".
Dica: leia os tópicos no fórum sobre tempos verbais. Percebi que você enfrentou alguns problemas com simple past, o simple present e o past perfect. Em alguns pontos, eu tive que interpretar o que você estava querendo dizer, mas talvez não seja exatamente o que você escreveria. Dessa forma, quando enviar uma mensagem em inglês para correção, sugiro que seja enviado um pequeno trecho de contexto, o que pode facilitar a revisão.
Observe também as sugestões dos demais usuários do fórum.
Cheers!
I have a friend who is in a bad situation. He had spent months trying to get a job. When he finally got one, he would have to work long hours for a miserable salary. Last week he said to me: "My father used to tell me that I should study to have a good life. Now I know that he was right".
Dica: leia os tópicos no fórum sobre tempos verbais. Percebi que você enfrentou alguns problemas com simple past, o simple present e o past perfect. Em alguns pontos, eu tive que interpretar o que você estava querendo dizer, mas talvez não seja exatamente o que você escreveria. Dessa forma, quando enviar uma mensagem em inglês para correção, sugiro que seja enviado um pequeno trecho de contexto, o que pode facilitar a revisão.
Observe também as sugestões dos demais usuários do fórum.
Cheers!
Minha sugestão de correção:
My father used to tell me
I have a friend who is in a bad situation. He spends months trying to get a job. When he gets one, he has to work long hours for a miserly salary. Last week he said to me: "My father used to tell me that I should study in order to have a good life. Now I know that he was right".
Comments:
Apart from a few mistakes, the text looks alright to me.
My father used to tell me
I have a friend who is in a bad situation. He spends months trying to get a job. When he gets one, he has to work long hours for a miserly salary. Last week he said to me: "My father used to tell me that I should study in order to have a good life. Now I know that he was right".
Comments:
Apart from a few mistakes, the text looks alright to me.
One common way to say the same thing:
"he has to work long hours for a meager salary."
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It would be understood as it is, I just tought this would be interesting too.
And could be another option, without mention that my post aim to build up some vocabulary too.
"he has to work long hours for a meager salary."
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It would be understood as it is, I just tought this would be interesting too.
And could be another option, without mention that my post aim to build up some vocabulary too.