Correção de texto: My future
Hi everyone!
I am a new student here and this is my new text
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My future
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I just turned 30 and I'll give myself a special present, a exchange to Vancouver, Canada.
I have been dreaming with this many years, but my life was so buzzy that I couldn't stop e spend a year abroad, but finally I'm gonna do this.
I hope to have great time with my news Canadians friends, I wanna improve my english and learn a new culture as well.
I am a new student here and this is my new text
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My future
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I just turned 30 and I'll give myself a special present, a exchange to Vancouver, Canada.
I have been dreaming with this many years, but my life was so buzzy that I couldn't stop e spend a year abroad, but finally I'm gonna do this.
I hope to have great time with my news Canadians friends, I wanna improve my english and learn a new culture as well.
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The following are suggestions aimed at improving your text:
Contractions like "wanna" and "gonna" tend to be best reserved for casual speech and informal writing. You would be well-advised not to use them outside such contexts.I just turned 30 and I'll give myself a special present - an exchange (trip) to Vancouver, Canada. I have been dreaming of / about this (for) many years, but my life has been so busy that I couldn't stop to spend a year abroad, but I'm finally going to do it.
I hope to have a great time with my new Canadian friends. I want to improve my English and learn about a new culture as well.