Correção de texto: My God! – Exclaimed Sandro...

– My God! – Exclaimed Sandro noting the Redbull cans.
Alda saw the cans and shaking her head negatively, Sandro gathered them to a corner to be subsequently put in the trash.
After about one hour, two were already in the property: Fabio and Estela were also physics students at CENURJ. He was 19 and she, 20 years old. Fabio, despite the red hair, had oriental features because of Japanese descent; Estela had green eyes and brown hair despite the African descent. He and she upgraded respectively to 3th and 4th period in the afternoon. Thanks to the project they did together, in a robotics contest, Prof. Moraes invited them to be part of your team. Everybody on the Francisco staff were present.


– Meu Deus! – admirou-se Sandro reparando nas latas de Redbull.
Alda viu as latas e fez um gesto de negação com a cabeça, e Sandro ajuntou-as num canto para que mais tarde fossem postas na lixeira.
Após cerca de 1 hora, mais dois já estavam no espaço: Fábio e Estela, também estudantes de física pelo CNURJ. Ele tinha 19, e ela, 20 anos de idade. Fábio, apesar do cabelo ruivo, possuía traços orientais devido à descendência japonesa; e Estela tinha descendência africana apesar dos olhos verdes e cabelo castanho. Ele e ela passaram respectivamente para o 3º e 4º período como estudantes do turno da tarde. Graças ao projeto que fizeram juntos, num concurso de robótica, Prof. Moraes os convidou para fazerem parte de sua equipe. Todos da equipe de Francisco estavam presentes.
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– My God! – SANDRO EXCLAIMED NOTICING the Redbull cans.
Alda saw the cans and SHOOK her head negatively, Sandro gathered them to a corner to THROW THEM INTO A BIN, LATER.
After about one hour, MORE two GUYS were already in the PLACE: Fabio and Estela were also physics students at CENURJ. He was 19 and she, 20 years old. Fabio, despite HIS red hair, HE had oriental features, because of HIS Japanese LINEAGE; Estela had green eyes and brown hair, REGARDLESS OF HER African ANCESTRY. He and she upgraded respectively to 3th and 4th period in the afternoon SHIFT. Thanks to the project THAT they did together, in a robotics contest; Prof. Moraes invited them to be part of HIS team. Everybody FROM the Francisco´S staff were present.