Correção de texto: My routine

Hello, my name is Beatriz I'm 15 years old and lives in Rio de Janeiro here since I was born, I am teaching medium, Monday I do not have class, so I always wake up later, but Tuesday and Wednesday I arrive at school the 7:00 a.m and I stay there until 6: 20 then I wake up 5:30 a.m,I shower and eat breakfast very fast, Thursday i get up 7:00 a.m because I arrive at school 8:20 a.m and Friday I caught 10 :40 .When I get home I'm a little tired I dine with my family and I slept after the novel.
The problem is that where I live has crappy Transport routes qualities and lack of security.
at my school I do volunteer work, I help my teachers in several things and I feel happy when I help them.
I think this kind of volunteer work is very cool.

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beatriz lorrayne escreveu:Hello, my name is Beatriz I'm 15 years old and lives in Rio de Janeiro here since I was born, I am teaching medium, Monday I do not have classes, so I always wake up later, but Tuesday and Wednesday I arrive at school the 7:00 a.m and I stay there until 6: 20 then I wake up 5:30 a.m,I shower and eat breakfast very fast, Thursday i get up 7:00 a.m because I arrive at school 8:20 a.m and Friday I caught 10 :40 .When I get home I'm a little tired I dine with my family and I slept after the novel.
The problem is that where I live has crappy Transport routes qualities and lack of security.
at my school I do volunteer work, I help my teachers in several things and I feel happy when I help them.
I think this kind of volunteer work is very cool.

Hello, my name is Beatriz, I was born in Rio de Janeiro and I have been living here all my life. I'm a 15 years old high school student, and my routine is the following:
On Mondays, I do not have classes, so I always wake up later. On Tuesdays and Wednesdays, I have to wake up earlier, around 5:30 a.m, shower and eat my breakfast very fast because I need to arrive at school at 7:00 sharp. I stay there all day, leaving only at 6:20 p.m. On Thursdays, I can sleep a little more, getting up at 7:00, because I don't need to stay at school before 8:20 a.m. My Fridays start later, at 10:40 in the morning.
When I get home at night, I'm a little tired, but I usually have dinner with my family and we talk a little before I go to bed, what happens just after the soap opera.
The main problems where I live are the inefficience of public transport and lack of security.
I do volunteer work in my school, I help my teachers in many activities and I feel happy when I do that. I think this kind of volunteer work is very cool.

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Hello, my name is Beatriz I'm 15 years old and I live in Rio de Janeiro here since I was born.
Currently I am high school student , and my regular/daily/typical routine is the following:
On Mondays I do not have class, so I always wake up later, on Tuesdays and Wednesdays I arrive at school at 7:00 a.m and I stay there until 6:20 (a.m.) So I wake up earlier, around 5:30 a.m, then I shower and eat breakfast very fast. On Thursdays I get up 7:00 a.m because I can arrive at school 8:20 a.m. Finally, on Fridays we start later, at 10:40 in the morning.
When I get home I'm a little tired, but I dine with my family, do some small talk and then I go to bed just after the soap (opera).
Problem is that the public transport is not quite reliable where I live. The bus routes don´t quite serve the community´s need and security is an issue.
I do volunteer work at my school, I help my teachers with many things/in many activities and I feel happy when I do that.
I think this kind of volunteer work is very cool.

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Well, it´s a kick-off, in haste. So, far from a definite, state-of-art work.
I will let to our editors to do the remaining fine-tuning. Feel at easy to correct me, guys. :D
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