Correção de texto: My Travel to Maceió
At the end of 2014, I and my family were travelling to Maceió - Brazil at the our vacation. The place is very beaultiful, with quite beachs and sun a lot. That year was my best vacation, because I can to know different places, different people and different culture. I admit that to travel to beachs are more cool with friends, but I liked even so. Although that the place is awesome, that place is very expensive! OMG, I spend all my money that I joined per 1 year! But althrough that place is expensive, I pretend return soon.
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Hi Tadeu!
Como vc escreveu "quite" em inglês significa um pouco, um tanto, bastante ... Depende do contexto.
Já a palavra "quiet" cabe perfeitamente no contexto do seu writing. Outras opções: "calm, peaceful, tranquil, so on"
Cheers!
Como vc escreveu "quite" em inglês significa um pouco, um tanto, bastante ... Depende do contexto.
Já a palavra "quiet" cabe perfeitamente no contexto do seu writing. Outras opções: "calm, peaceful, tranquil, so on"
Cheers!
COMO COMBINAR PALAVRAS EM INGLÊS
Hi there!
Sugestão para correção:
My Trip to Maceió
At the end of 2014, MY family AND I were travelling (TRAVELLED) to Maceió - Brazil ON vacation. The place is very beaultiful, with quite beachEs and a lot OF SUN. That was my best vacation, because I GOT to know different places, different people and different culture. I admit that to travel to beachEs IS cooLER with friends, but I liked (THAT) even so. Although the place is awesome, IT is ALSO very expensive! OMG, I spenT all my money that I SAVED IN A year! Although that place is expensive, I INTEND to return (GO BACK) soon.
Note: seguem correções em letras maiúsculas e opções de estilo e lógica dentro do contexto apresentado, entre ( ). Espero ter ajudado.
Cheers!
Sugestão para correção:
My Trip to Maceió
At the end of 2014, MY family AND I were travelling (TRAVELLED) to Maceió - Brazil ON vacation. The place is very beaultiful, with quite beachEs and a lot OF SUN. That was my best vacation, because I GOT to know different places, different people and different culture. I admit that to travel to beachEs IS cooLER with friends, but I liked (THAT) even so. Although the place is awesome, IT is ALSO very expensive! OMG, I spenT all my money that I SAVED IN A year! Although that place is expensive, I INTEND to return (GO BACK) soon.
Note: seguem correções em letras maiúsculas e opções de estilo e lógica dentro do contexto apresentado, entre ( ). Espero ter ajudado.
Cheers!
I would use "with many beaches/a lot of beaches/a number of beaches'' etc, instead of "quite beaches".
http://www.manythings.org/audio/sentences/201.html
I would also redo this bit (here follows my version):
I spent all my money that I saved in a year! (or -all money saved [up] in a year)
http://www.manythings.org/audio/sentences/201.html
I would also redo this bit (here follows my version):
I spent all my money that I saved in a year! (or -all money saved [up] in a year)
You're welcome Tadeu:
Quanto ao comentário do PPAULO eu ratifico, só que ficou uma dúvida...
Você referiu a "quite beaches" como quantidade, se "yes" existem algumas alternativas: some, a few, a lot, so on... (Mas não "quite").
Se a ideia era "quiet (calmas, pacíficas)", houve um erro de spelling, Right?
See you around!
Quanto ao comentário do PPAULO eu ratifico, só que ficou uma dúvida...
Você referiu a "quite beaches" como quantidade, se "yes" existem algumas alternativas: some, a few, a lot, so on... (Mas não "quite").
Se a ideia era "quiet (calmas, pacíficas)", houve um erro de spelling, Right?
See you around!
Well noticed indeed, very well noticed Cinnamon. Good teamwork!
COMO COMBINAR PALAVRAS EM INGLÊS
A ideía era quiet (calmas, pacíficas). Como fica o correto?Cinnamon escreveu:You're welcome Tadeu:
Quanto ao comentário do PPAULO eu ratifico, só que ficou uma dúvida...
Você referiu a "quite beaches" como quantidade, se "yes" existem algumas alternativas: some, a few, a lot, so on... (Mas não "quite").
Se a ideia era "quiet (calmas, pacíficas)", houve um erro de spelling, Right?
See you around!