Correção de texto - o sistema propõe uma interface...

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O sistema propõe uma interface seguindo as heurísticas de usabilidade, utilizando conceitos de responsividade e sendo suportado por qualquer plataforma e executado em qualquer sistema operacional.

The system proposes an interface following the usability heuristics, using concepts of responsiveness and it is supported for any platform and running on any operational system

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Avatar do usuário Donay Mendonça 49075 21 73 1138
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O sistema propõe uma interface seguindo as heurísticas de usabilidade, utilizando conceitos de responsividade e sendo suportado por qualquer plataforma e executado em qualquer sistema operacional.

The system proposes an interface following the usability heuristics, using concepts of responsiveness and it can be supported by any platforms available and run on any operating systems.


The operating system is the most important program that runs on a computer. An operating system (OS) is system software that manages computer hardware and software resources and provides common services for computer programs.
An operational system is a term used in data warehousing to refer to a system that is used to process the day-to-day transactions of an organization.

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Avatar do usuário PPAULO 39185 6 32 684
The interface user (UI) of the system/software is desined with an heuristic approach...
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The system has an heuristic-based interface not a system-oriented one, so it meets the highest responsivity standards wich the user may expect. The interface is effective and consistent with the user needs. Besides, the software/program runs on any Operational System.

Besides, the application/software/program is able to run on any operational system/nearly all Operational System. There´s a 32-bit and other 64-bit version of it.

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The 32/64-bit versions was a stretch, but I added this detail since you had mentioned "any operational system". If you have a nice, well-thought program that runs on any operational system, perhaps you want that program operating on any version too! Not that a 32-bit don´t run on a 64-bit computer, but the other way around isn´t possible.

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Ah, this is just an ESL approach, the natives, more advanced ones or techie-savvy may comment and polish it further!
Avatar do usuário PPAULO 39185 6 32 684
Agreed. Thanks Donay, this time Brazilian Portuguese has thrown me a curve. :D In Portuguese we say "sistema operacional", you know, the false cognate thing!