Eu tenho que enviar essa redação e vale nota, será que alguém poderia ler e ver se tem algum erro que eu deixei passar? :/
On that day, I woke up with a "crash" noise. My mom was finishing packing
my stuff, when something fell on the floor. When I got up, I saw that the broken
thing was my favorite cup and there was hot milk on top of the suit. By this moment,
I realized two things: first, that I, a 9-year-old girl, was REALLY going to travel
by plane alone and second, that my mom was more nervous than me. That is a lot of
nervousness! Then, everything went on, not far from my routine, except for the fact that
my mother seemed to pay attention to every single breath I took.
This was kind of making me feel strange. I mean, if the flight would be so simple
as she had told me, what was the reason for all the overprotection? By that time, I felt
very important, but crucially, I felt independent. I would be able to show my mom that
I could do stuff alone and she would be very proud. I couldn't feel more confident.
We arrived the airport by 9:30 am, two hours before the flight. Then, we went to
the company's balcony and explained my situation. They couldn't have been more gentle and
considerate. This made my mom feel more calm, which I considered great, since she looked
so pale that I thought that anything in that airport could make she burst into tears. This,
for my surprise, didn't happen - at least, not in front of me. Actually, the following
steps went on in a simple way: I entered the special room, then the plane. Then, I reached the
other airport and got my baggage. A kind stewardess took care of me the whole way. I, however,
was sure that I could have done it successfully alone. In my opinion, that's why I looked so
happy when I met my grandparents there.
In fact, they said that, more than happy, I looked very mature, but I am not sure
if this was just one of those exaggerations that grandparents say to make us feel well. My
mom, who was calling every five minutes, said that she was infinitely proud of her little
girl and, more importantly, that she was missing me enormously, what I have to admit
was totally reciprocal. Anyway, this day was a big step for me, and there are some moments I
will never forget.
Muuito obrigada ! ~ <3