Brazil team has won on last Tuesday, their tenth gold medal at paralimpic game in Rio de Janeiro. With record beat, the Brazilian relay team (for visually impaired) won the final prove under the top place on the podium.
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Brazil won their tenth gold medal at Rio de Janeiro Paralympic Games last Tuesday. The relay team (for the visually impaired) won the final with a record time and they took up the gold medal place on the podium.