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The protest called “Ni Una Menos” took place for the first time in 2015, gathering thousands of people in the center of Buenos Aires. The initiative of a group of women in Argentiva, including journalists and psychologists had touched men and women who condemn the gender violence.
The leaders estimates that about 275 women were killed in two demonstrations, in july this year.
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The protest called “Ni Una Menos” took place for the first time in 2015, gathering thousands of people in the center of Buenos Aires. The initiative of a group of women in Argentiva, including journalists and psychologists had touched men and women who condemn the gender violence.
The leaders estimates that about 275 women were killed in two demonstrations, in july this year.

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The protest called “Ni Una Menos” took place for the first time in 2015, gathering thousands of people in the center of Buenos Aires. The initiative of a group of women in Argentina, including journalists and psychologists has touched men and women who condemn the gender violence.
The leaders estimate (OU leader estimates) that about 275 women were killed in two demonstrations, in July this year.

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