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PROFESSIONAL PROFILE
Over 10 years of IT experience in managing and solving problems in different areas (desktops, servers, tape library, networks, storages, bladecenters) and writing protocols for IT technicians to handle similar issues in the system on their own.
Emphasis on Microsoft platform, with expertise also in Cisco, VMWare, SonicWall, IBM and other platforms
Good people skills, sharing and exchanging knowledge and skills with colleagues as a common practice
Portuguese fluent and advanced English performing interchange of one year to improve


PROFESSIONAL PROFILE
Over 10 years of IT experience in managing and solving problems in different areas (desktops, servers, tape library, networks, storages, bladecenters) and writing protocols for IT technicians to handle similar issues in the system on their own.
Emphasis on Microsoft platform, with expertise also in Cisco, VMWare, SonicWall, IBM and other platforms
Good people skills, sharing and exchanging knowledge and skills with colleagues as a common practice
Portuguese fluent and advanced English performing interchange of one year to improve


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Avatar do usuário Henry Cunha 9960 2 17 177
Muito bom. Altere um pouco somente esta ultima frase:

Portuguese-fluent and English-advanced, pursuing interchange of one year for further improvement
Avatar do usuário Flavia.lm 3885 1 9 86
Henry, tenho visto mais a utilização de "Portuguese - native speaker" em vez de "fluente" quando se fala sobre a língua mãe, que acredito ser o caso do Renato. O que tens a dizer? Vês alguma diferença no sentido?

Renato, curiosidade: o que vc quis dizer com "people skills"? Relacionamento interpessoal?
Avatar do usuário Henry Cunha 9960 2 17 177
Yes, Flávia, "native speaker" may be even better.

Yes, "people skills" means "relacionamento interpessoal". It's a good expression, widely used, as in "She has good people skills", etc.
Avatar do usuário Flavia.lm 3885 1 9 86
Aprendi uma nova hoje. 8-) Obrigada