Correção de texto: scary clowns

Andrezzatkm 2 8 111
Thare have been many news in a city of USA about the appearence of some people dressed as clawn and trying to lure children into the woods. Some chiildren even reported that someone holding money and candy waved at them to convence them to aproach. No one know what is their intention. But everyone is worryied. Enyone who is hidden in the wood covering his face, is surely up to no good.The police is alert, but there is no clue about the suspects.

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gian2hard 1 7 52
Hi Andrezza, friendly suggestion!

The appearance of individuals wearing clown costumes in an attempt to lure children into the woods have swamped the news in a city in the United States. Some children were reported having been offered cash and treats in an attempt to approach them. The motive is still unclear, but people are worried. Anyone hidden in the woods behind a clown costume is surely up to no good. The police is alert though no leads have been found on the suspects yet.
Andrezzatkm 2 8 111
O que eu quis dizer foi:

Some chiildren even reported that someone holding money and candy waved at them to convence them to aproach.
Algumas crianças comunicaram que alguém segurando dinheiro e doces fez sinal para elas para convence-las a se aproximar.

Enyone who is hidden in the wood covering his face, is surely up to no good
Uma pessoa escondida na mata com o rosto coberto, com certeza está aprontando algo.