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So, they left to the beach. But, before all this they go to Jane´s house. When Taylor and Lisa arrived there, Jane said:

Jane: Hi, everybody! You are late, don´t you?
Lisa: Hi! And we´re not late!

The trip took a long time and they talk each other a lot. When they saw the beach, Taylor exclaimed: ´Oh! I´m amazed! This beach is very beautiful and the sun shines too much!
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Donay Mendonça 60325 21 100 1457
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So, they left to the beach. But before all this they went to Jane's house. When Taylor and Lisa arrived there, Jane said:

Jane: Hi, everybody! You are late, aren't you?
Lisa: Hi! No, we're not late!

The trip took a long time and they talk to each other a lot. When they saw the beach, Taylor exclaimed: Oh! I'm amazed! This beach is very beautiful and the sun shines so much!

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