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Normally kids like pets and it is common there is a pet at home. Why are they so important to us?
If a kid has a pet at home, it will be a friend from the moment that it arrives until the moment it die. People create a careless about them and most of the time they become a family member.
This relationship is important because they can be very lovely and friendly when you most need.
"The dog is the best friend of the man", who never listened it? And who disagree? Since you treated your dog with love you can be sure if you need to be protect it will be there for you. This is not only applied for dogs but for all pets.
Imagine that you had a hard day at work and when you arrive home you have a pet to receive you with happiness. Don't matter how difficult your day was, you will have some minutes to play with it and get a better day. However it is important that there is someone to care it because it is not fair having a pet to let it locked or alone, they need someone to play and give love to it.
Pets are not so different than us, they want to show us how cleaver they can be paying our attention. When you learn some joke to them and see that they are doing exactly what you said is very nice.
The worst moment is when we lose them, after a time we forget how is our house without them and when they pass away is like there is something missing in our lives. Most of the time they can't be replaceable because of the relationship created.
In short, the pets can teach us a lot, mainly about friendship, love and loyalty.
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Normally kids like pets and it is common for them to have a pet at home. Why are they so important to us?
If a kid has a pet at home, it will be a friend from the moment that it arrives until the moment it dies. People create a careless about them and most of the time they become a family member.
This relationship is important because they can be very lovely and friendly when you most need them.
"Dogs are man's best friend", who never heard it? And who disagrees? Since you treated your dog with love you can be sure if you need to be protect it will be there for you. This is not only applied for dogs but for all pets.
Imagine that you had a hard day at work and when you arrive home you have a pet to receive you with happiness. It doesn't matter how difficult your day was, you will have some minutes to play with it and get a better day. However it is important that there is someone to take care of it because it is not fair having a pet to let it locked or alone, they need someone to play and give love to it.
Pets are not so different from us, they want to show us how clever they can be paying our attention. When you learn some joke to them and see that they are doing exactly what you said is very nice.
The worst moment is when we lose them, after a time we forget how is our house without them and when they pass away is like there is something missing in our lives. Most of the time they can't be replaceable because of the relationship created.
In short, pets can teach us a lot, mainly about friendship, love and loyalty.


Ressuscitado pela última vez por Tatiane Rodrigues em 27 Jun 2013, 01:37.