Correção de "texto sobre aprendizado do inglês''

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Como poderia dizer isso da melhor maneira possível em inglês?

"One day I go to the cinema and when I was there I realize that the movie was completly in english and in this day I felt angry .
I told to my own I hate this language but definitly it's most important language aroud the world I will try to learn it.
After 1 year studying hard I'm be able to speak with a native speakers and I watch the movie that I can't understand before and now I'm so excited to keep with my language learning process.
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One day, I went to the cinema and when I was there I realized that the movie was completely in English, and on this day I felt angry.
I told myself: ''I hate this language'', but it's definitely the most important language in the world; I will try to learn it.
After 1 year studying hard I'm able to speak with native speakers and now I watch the movie that I couldn't understand before and I'm so excited to keep up with my language learning process.
Avatar do usuário Lucas PAYNE 260 7
Obrigado professor Donay.