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Each person has a different story of life, some of them may have an amazing childhood and others may have a terrible childhood. So it is not right to say that every childhood is happy. Some people say that when we are child we almost don't have worries and that's why the childhood is the happiest time of our life. Most of people live this way,one of the worries that they have is how much time they have to play or if the weather is gonna be good to go to street to meet their friends. Sometimes it is easy this way.
However some children have a little difficult life. When you don't have a stable situation of life, you may starve, not sleep well, need to work, or other things that nobody should pass during the childhood. There are kids that are abused and this may creat a trauma for life.
When you don't have the best experience when you are a child, you can enjoy it in your adulthood and make this time the happiest, working hard and getting everything you always want because you know when you have kids you will want to give a life for them that you should not have.
Even with all problems that a kid may have, there are those that are very happy with a simple life. Some kids have no idea how much the life can offer to them and enjoy it with just the little they have.
In short, it depends a lot what life offers to you. It is clear that who does not have a good condition of life might have more problems than who lives well. However every childhood should be enjoyed no matter how much money you have or place you live because it is a time that can make a difference in the life.
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Everyone has a different life story, some of them may have had an amazing childhood and others may have had a terrible childhood. So it is not right to say that every childhood is happy. Some people say that when we are children we seldom have any worries and that's why childhood is the happiest time of our lives. Most people live this way, one of the worries that they have is how much time they have to play or if the weather is going to be good enough to go to the street to meet their friends. Sometimes it is easy this way.
However, some children have a little difficult life. When you don't have a stable situation of life, you may starve, not sleep well, need to work, or other things that nobody should go through during their childhood. There are kids that are abused and this may cause a trauma for life.
When you don't have the best experience when you are a child, you can enjoy it in your adulthood and make this time the happiest, working hard and getting everything you always wanted because you know when you have kids you will want to give a life to them that you didn't have.
In spite of all the problems that a kid may have, there are those that are very happy with a simple life. Some kids have no idea how much life can offer them and enjoy it with just the little they have.
In short, it depends a lot on what life offers you. It is clear that those who do not have a good condition of life might have more problems than those who live well. However every childhood should be enjoyed no matter how much money you have or place you live because it is a time that can make a difference in life.