Correção de Texto "Spending vacation at home"

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We have a lot of different things to do when we are at home. Enjoy our family, read an interesting book, watch a good movie. Besides that, most of people who live in the same house for years don’t even know the amazing places that there’re in the city they live.
I’m pretty sure that if you think about it, you will figure out some touristic points in your city that you hadn’t visited yet. And they are right there, very close to you! So, spending your vacation at home can be boring? Yes, but just if you want it. There are so much cultural and historical places that can increase your knowledge and the way you see life. I have no doubt it’ll be a terrific experience.
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We have a lot of different things to do when we are at home. Enjoying our family, reading an interesting book, watching a good movie. Besides that, most people who live in the same house for years don’t even know the amazing places that there’re in the city they live.
I’m pretty sure that if you think about it, you will figure out some tourist spots in your city that you haven't visited yet. And they are right there, very close to you! So, spending your vacation at home can be boring? Yes, but just if you want it to be. There are so much cultural and historical places that can improve your knowledge and the way you see life. I have no doubt it’ll be a terrific experience.