Correção de texto: Surrogate Mother 2

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In exchange of 30 thousand dollars, Clara accepted rent her womb for the pregnancy. She is taken to the laboratory, where she is inseminated. It works at the first attempt, which is motive of happiness for the couple, but motive of fear to Clara.

She sigh a contract in which, she let is clear that she will have to give the child to the blood parents before leave the maternity hospital. But, during the gestation, Clara is taken by the feeling of being a mother, and regrets participating this scheme, because she don’t want to be emotionally attached to a baby who isn’t hers, but she already loves the baby she is carrying, as he was really hers.
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In exchange of 30 thousand dollars, Clara accepted rent her womb for the pregnancy. She is taken to the laboratory, where she is inseminated. It works at the first attempt, which is motive of happiness for the couple, but motive of fear to Clara.

She sigh a contract in which, she let is clear that she will have to give the child to the blood parents before leave the maternity hospital. But, during the gestation, Clara is taken by the feeling of being a mother, and regrets participating this scheme, because she don’t want to be emotionally attached to a baby who isn’t hers, but she already loves the baby she is carrying, as he was really hers.


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(In exchange) for 30 thousand dollars, Clara accepts to rent her womb to surrogate. She is taken to the laboratory, where she is inseminated. It works at the first attempt, which is a motive of happiness for the couple, but a motive of fear for Clara.

She signs a contract in which she lets it clear that she will have to give the child to the biological parents before leaving the maternity hospital. But, during the gestation, Clara is taken by the feeling of being a mother, and regrets participating in that/the scheme, because she doesn’t want to be emotionally attached to a baby who isn’t hers but she already loves the baby she is carrying, as if he were really hers.