Correção de texto: Surrogate Mother 3

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After a complicated labor that left Clara sterile, she refuses to give the child and flees with the baby. She knows that she can’t have child anymore and the only child generated by her, however don’t has her blood, has her maternal love, which is stronger than anything else. As she sighed a contract, the young lady was being seek by police for kidnapping. The blood parents do everything they can to find her.

When she was found, she is arrested, but with the help of family and friends she get an attorney, and sue the parents of the baby for not paying her the promised money and, here start a legal battle on the custody of the child.

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After a complicated labor that left Clara sterile, she refuses to give the child and flees with the baby. She knows that she can’t have child anymore and the only child generated by her, however don’t has her blood, has her maternal love, which is stronger than anything else. As she sighed a contract, the young lady was being seek by police for kidnapping. The blood parents do everything they can to find her.

When she was found, she is arrested, but with the help of family and friends she get an attorney, and sue the parents of the baby for not paying her the promised money and, here start a legal battle on the custody of the child.

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After a complicated labor that left Clara sterile, she refuses to give the child [to the biological parents] and flees with the baby. She knows that she can’t have a child anymore and that the only child born to her, although, doesn’t have her blood, has however her maternal love which is stronger than anything else. Once she signed a contract, the young lady is being sought by police for kidnapping. The biological parents are doing everything they can to find her.

When she is found, she will be arrested, but with the help of her family and friends she will get a defending counsel(lor), and sue the parents of the baby for not paying her the promised money and, here starts a legal battle on the custody of the child.