Correção de texto: Surrogate Mother

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The couple Ana and Zeca has a desire to have a child. After several frustrated attempts to get pregnant, Ana receive from Dr Alvaro, a well known doctor, the sad news: She can’t get pregnant. The doctor, then tell the couple that there is a way to make their dreams come true: find a surrogate mother.
Clara is a young poor lady, who live in a slum in Rio de Janeiro who to help to bring home the money, works in the morning as a clerk in a bakery and moonlight as a dancer in a café in Copacabana, in the south zone of the city. She see a chance to get a better life surrogating her womb to Ana and Zeca.
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The couple Ana and Zeca has a desire to have a child. After several frustrated attempts to get pregnant, Ana receive from Dr Alvaro, a well known doctor, the sad news: She can’t get pregnant. The doctor, then tell the couple that there is a way to make their dreams come true: find a surrogate mother.
Clara is a young poor [b]lady, who [/b]live in a slum in Rio de Janeiro who to help to bring home the money, works in the morning as a clerk in a bakery and moonlight as a dancer in a café in Copacabana, in the south zone of the city. She see a chance to get a better life surrogating her womb to Ana and Zeca.

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The couple Ana and Zeca has a desire to have a child. After several frustrated attempts to get pregnant, Ana receives from Dr Alvaro, a well-known doctor, the sad news: She can’t get pregnant. The doctor then tells the couple that there is a way to make their dreams come true: to find a surrogate mother.
Clara is a poor young lady who lives in a slum in Rio de Janeiro. She helps [her mother and siblings] to bring money home by working as a clerk in a bakery in the morning and as a dancer in a café in Copacabana, in the south zone of the city, in the evening. She sees a chance to get a better life by renting out her womb to Ana and Zeca.