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Taylor and Jane were on the road. The car was running so fast. Suddenly, Taylor said:
Taylor: Hey, Jane! Where does Lisa live? I can´t remember it!
Jane: Oh, my love! Maybe Paul gets her phone number. I´m going to call him.
Jane: Hello! Is that Paul?
Paul: Oh! Yes! What do you want, Jane?
Jane: Do you have Lisa´s phone number?
Paul: Oh...Let me see...Yes, I do. Her phone number is one six double five oh four two oh.
Jane: Thank you, Paul. See you soon.
Now, Jane calls Lisa.
Lisa: Hello? Who´s talking?
Jane: Hi, Lisa. It´s Jane. could you give your address?
Lisa: OH! My address is: R. Star club, 221. Near of the post office. It´s a blue house. Did you get me?
Jane: Uhm...Yes, I did. Ok! We´re going there. It´s a peace cake.
It was seven forty five in the evening. If everything comes right tonight will be a great day.