Correção de texto: The black market - GUNS

"The international black market of guns is the most profitable business around the planet, and it's easy to know the reason of that. Due the incessant conflicts around the world the black market is always blowing up. The internet as well is a important factor to this market, you just need to open the Google and do a fast search to see websites selling guns and illegal weapons (illegal in Brazil of course)."

Well friends, this is a small text of my own, which I made to practice my writing. I would appreciate any help that you can give me. :)

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Hi, ReyManolo!
Your writing is great, congratulations! Just take a look at the things I highlighted in order to make it even better:

"The international black market of guns is the most profitable business around the planet, and it's easy to know the reason for that. Due to the incessant conflicts around the world, the black market is always blowing up. Internet is an important factor for this market as well: you just need to open Google and do a fast search to see websites selling guns and illegal weapons (illegal in Brazil of course)."

Some remarks:
1) Take a look at the difference between due and due to on this Thesaurus:
Due: http://www.thesaurus.com/browse/due?s=t
Due to: http://www.thesaurus.com/browse/due%20to?s=t
2) It's not necessary to use the definite article "the" before the nouns "internet" and "Google" when they are the subject of the sentence. Same thing happens with some nouns like "people", "religion", "lunch", "medicine", names of countries, etc. We have a great article about this, btw: https://www.englishexperts.com.br/artigos-em-ingles/
3) We don't usually use as well at the beginning of a clause. It usually comes at the end of a clause: "I just ignored it. I think everybody else did as well."

Have fun and keep up the good work!
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