Correção de texto: The effect of the first love

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The effects of the first love

It has been a long time ago when I have my first relationship. Although this is completely past, I have to admit that my first love have a big effect in my life. Through my first relationship, I could learn how to share my feelings and emotions, I could understand my faults, I became a more tolerant person and so on. Without this virtues, I would have lost many opportunities that brought me where I am.

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The effects of the first love

It has been a long time since I had my first relationship. Although this is completely past, I have to admit that my first love had a big effect on my life. Through my first relationship, I could learn how to share my feelings and emotions, I could understand my faults, I became a more tolerant person and so on. Without these virtues, I would have lost many opportunities that made me what I am today.
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It has been a long time ago when I have my first relationship. ( It's passed a long time since I had my first relationship)
Although this is completely past, I have to admit that my first love has a big effect in my life. Through my first relationship, I could learn how to share my feelings and emotions, I could understand my faults, I became a more tolerant person and so on. Without those virtues, I would have lost many opportunities that brought me where I am.