Telma had done the proofreading and corrections. As always, she did a great job!
Now, Felipe, I think well-deserved congratulations are in store. In my opinion, you managed to express yourself well and you are a rough diamond in need of some finishing touches.
Thus, as Telma has pointed out (and you can see), you have to work on some points: preposition usage, word choice (including rewording of words in the text), a bit of verb tense in your studies (you are almost there, close but no cigar...).
You need to get acquainted to some usual (natural) expressions used in English, as is the case of "living next door to someone".
Plus, the idiom "get off" more often than not, denotes the people leaving/departing, but usually in a unexpected or sudden way (prematurely sometimes, like leaving without even saying good bye...such a rush.)
Anyway, just minor corrections. We could say that you´re in the right path towards you FCE in 2016. I mean, if you still keep eyes on your goal as stated in your profile!
Keep up the good work.