Correção de texto: The Importance of Social Networking

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The importance of "Social Networkin" these days

Social networks these days are very important to interaction, to make new friends, talk with friends and relatives distant and next and also for disseminating services and products professionally social networks in a way help you to know what happens in the world all the time. You can play online games with other peoples of other cities and countries and know them, talk them it's interesting. I think this is the importance of social networks for those who know it use them currectly.

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The importance of "Social Networking" these days

These days, social networks are very important. They allow you to interact, make new friends, talk with friends and relatives who live far away and also to promote services and products professionally. Social networks in a way help you to know what happens in the world all the time. You can play online games with other people from other cities and countries and get to know them, talk to them; it's interesting. I think this is the importance of social networks for those who know how to use them correctly.
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