"The last time I went shopping was with my girlfriend, we went to buy a clothe for our daugther that will go born in 2011 March."
Porfavor, o que errei e em que posso melhorar meu texto??
Correção de texto "The last time I went shopping was..."
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20 Dez 2010, 16:13
Jedson,
Sugestão de melhoria para sua frase:
"The last time I went shopping I was with my girlfriend. We went to buy clothes for our daugther that is going to be born in March 2011.
Bons estudos!
Sugestão de melhoria para sua frase:
"The last time I went shopping I was with my girlfriend. We went to buy clothes for our daugther that is going to be born in March 2011.
Bons estudos!
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20 Dez 2010, 20:25
The last time I went shopping my girlfriend joined me.We went to buy clothes for our daugther that will be born in March 2011
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20 Dez 2010, 21:10
Grafia correta é "daughter"
Digníssimos, me ajudem por favor!
Entrei no Livemocha por indicação do site e agora tem um garotinho solicitando minha correção de um testículo baseado no mesmo tema deste tópico. Claro que indicarei o fórum e o autor.
Tanks a lot!
"I went shopping. I paid for new shirts, hats, shoes and delicious french chocalate. I love mexican chocolate!
I went with my bestfriend: Carly! She is amazing and adore french chocalate too!
We are went by car of Carly, because my motorcycle it's broken."
Entrei no Livemocha por indicação do site e agora tem um garotinho solicitando minha correção de um testículo baseado no mesmo tema deste tópico. Claro que indicarei o fórum e o autor.
Tanks a lot!
"I went shopping. I paid for new shirts, hats, shoes and delicious french chocalate. I love mexican chocolate!
I went with my bestfriend: Carly! She is amazing and adore french chocalate too!
We are went by car of Carly, because my motorcycle it's broken."
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20 Jan 2011, 10:24
Cérebro,
"I went shopping. I bought new shirts, hats, shoes and delicious french chocalate. I love mexican chocolate!
I went with my bestfriend: Carly! She is amazing and loves french chocalate too!
We went there in Carly's car, because my motorcycle is broken."
Boa sorte!
"I went shopping. I bought new shirts, hats, shoes and delicious french chocalate. I love mexican chocolate!
I went with my bestfriend: Carly! She is amazing and loves french chocalate too!
We went there in Carly's car, because my motorcycle is broken."
Boa sorte!
Obrigadão, amigo.
Sempre curto suas respostas, vc´s fazem parecer tão simples que até me sinto desajeitado! rs rss
Até a próxima.
Sempre curto suas respostas, vc´s fazem parecer tão simples que até me sinto desajeitado! rs rss
Até a próxima.
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24 Jan 2011, 01:59
donay mendonça escreveu:Cérebro,
"I went shopping. I bought new shirts, hats, shoes and delicious french chocalate. I love mexican chocolate!
I went with my bestfriend: Carly! She is amazing and loves french chocalate too!
We went there in Carly's car, because my motorcycle is broken."
Boa sorte!
Just some small issues with punctuation and capitalization:
I went shopping. I bought new shirts, hats, shoes and delicious French chocolate. I love Mexican chocolate!
I went with my best friend Carly! She is amazing and loves French chocolate too!
We went there in Carly's car because my motorcycle is broken.
All the best.
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