Correção de texto "The last time I went shopping was..."

Jedson 2 2
"The last time I went shopping was with my girlfriend, we went to buy a clothe for our daugther that will go born in 2011 March."


Porfavor, o que errei e em que posso melhorar meu texto??

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Donay Mendonça 23 127 1.7k
Jedson,

Sugestão de melhoria para sua frase:

"The last time I went shopping I was with my girlfriend. We went to buy clothes for our daugther that is going to be born in March 2011.


Bons estudos!
Daniel.S 1 2 11
The last time I went shopping my girlfriend joined me.We went to buy clothes for our daugther that will be born in March 2011
Flavia.lm 1 10 100
Grafia correta é "daughter"
Digníssimos, me ajudem por favor!

Entrei no Livemocha por indicação do site e agora tem um garotinho solicitando minha correção de um testículo baseado no mesmo tema deste tópico. Claro que indicarei o fórum e o autor.

Tanks a lot!

"I went shopping. I paid for new shirts, hats, shoes and delicious french chocalate. I love mexican chocolate!
I went with my bestfriend: Carly! She is amazing and adore french chocalate too!
We are went by car of Carly, because my motorcycle it's broken."
Donay Mendonça 23 127 1.7k
Cérebro,

"I went shopping. I bought new shirts, hats, shoes and delicious french chocalate. I love mexican chocolate!
I went with my bestfriend: Carly! She is amazing and loves french chocalate too!
We went there in Carly's car, because my motorcycle is broken."


Boa sorte!
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Obrigadão, amigo.

Sempre curto suas respostas, vc´s fazem parecer tão simples que até me sinto desajeitado! rs rss

Até a próxima.
Henry Cunha 3 18 190
donay mendonça escreveu:Cérebro,

"I went shopping. I bought new shirts, hats, shoes and delicious french chocalate. I love mexican chocolate!
I went with my bestfriend: Carly! She is amazing and loves french chocalate too!
We went there in Carly's car, because my motorcycle is broken."


Boa sorte!
Just some small issues with punctuation and capitalization:

I went shopping. I bought new shirts, hats, shoes and delicious French chocolate. I love Mexican chocolate!
I went with my best friend Carly! She is amazing and loves French chocolate too!
We went there in Carly's car because my motorcycle is broken.

All the best.