Correção de texto ''Today I woke up...''
- Nildotex
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Today I woke up at 8 a.m.
I went to the bank with my wife to get money for pay our counts. Then I went to the center city to buy medicine a dvd and to get my guitar. For my surprise the store was closed. I returned at my house without my guitar.
Hello my friends, this my first text, I'm beginning my studyies in english, please help me with corrections and a correct form to write!!!!
God bless you guys!!!!
I went to the bank with my wife to get money for pay our counts. Then I went to the center city to buy medicine a dvd and to get my guitar. For my surprise the store was closed. I returned at my house without my guitar.
Hello my friends, this my first text, I'm beginning my studyies in english, please help me with corrections and a correct form to write!!!!
God bless you guys!!!!
INGLÊS PARA VIAGENS
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- Donay Mendonça
- Professor de inglês com 20 anos de experiência.
- Localização: Morrinhos - Goiás
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Algumas sugestões de correção:
Today I woke up at 8 a.m.
I went to the bank with my wife to get money to pay our bills. Then I went downtown to buy medicine, a DVD and to get my guitar. To my surprise, the store was closed. I returned to my house without my guitar.
Hello my friends, this my first text. I'm beginning my studies of English. Please help me with corrections and a correct form to write!!!!
God bless you guys!!!!