Correção de Texto: "Two friends talking about criminals"
- Locker.Studier
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I guess who something is wrong in that text. Maybe on the 4th paragraph of the text. (If someone ask, I'm made a conversation for my blog to explain the use of the phrasal verb "to get out of".)
- Hey man, what's up?
- All keeping working well. And you, what's going on?
- The same man. Just you knew (about?) the blow up?
- Yeah, and I knew more things, the first one was about the man who did this. He wanna to steal a store, and he's seen that he can not do. After, he got off the car and threw a bomb.
- Well man, it's a bad thing.
- Hey man, what's up?
- All keeping working well. And you, what's going on?
- The same man. Just you knew (about?) the blow up?
- Yeah, and I knew more things, the first one was about the man who did this. He wanna to steal a store, and he's seen that he can not do. After, he got off the car and threw a bomb.
- Well man, it's a bad thing.
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- Donay Mendonça
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Locker,
Sem um contexto mais amplo. Minhas sugestões são:
Hey man, what's up?
- All keeping working well. And you, what's going on?
- The same man. Have you heard about the explosion?
- Yeah, and I knew more things, the first one was about the man who did this. He wanted to rob a store, and he's seen that he cannot do that. Then, he got off the car and threw a bomb.
- Well man, it's a bad thing.
Sem um contexto mais amplo. Minhas sugestões são:
Hey man, what's up?
- All keeping working well. And you, what's going on?
- The same man. Have you heard about the explosion?
- Yeah, and I knew more things, the first one was about the man who did this. He wanted to rob a store, and he's seen that he cannot do that. Then, he got off the car and threw a bomb.
- Well man, it's a bad thing.
- Locker.Studier
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Well, thanks a lot.
Off the record: can you explain some things?
The first one was: How "he same man. Just you knew (about?) the blow up?" became "The same man. Have you heard about the explosion?". The second was about the verb want - is wanna or wanted? Where I use wanna? (I've knew its verb is used in informal conversations).
How to steal become to rob and why?
Just this. I just learning, and that is my doubts now. (grammar isn't up to me)
Off the record: can you explain some things?
The first one was: How "he same man. Just you knew (about?) the blow up?" became "The same man. Have you heard about the explosion?". The second was about the verb want - is wanna or wanted? Where I use wanna? (I've knew its verb is used in informal conversations).
How to steal become to rob and why?
Just this. I just learning, and that is my doubts now. (grammar isn't up to me)
- Donay Mendonça
- Professor de inglês com 20 anos de experiência.
- Localização: Morrinhos - Goiás
- Membro desde: 15 Abr 2008, 00:47
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Locker,
Foram mudanças baseadas nas minhas deduções sobre seu texto:
"Explosion" é um termo melhor para "explosão".
"Have you heard about" é uma expressão mais natural no contexto deduzido por mim.
"Wanted"= queria. "Wanna"= quer.
Sugiro fazer uma busca no canto superior da tela sobre "rob" x "steal"/ "want" x "wanna". Este assunto encontra-se explicado no fórum.
Foram mudanças baseadas nas minhas deduções sobre seu texto:
"Explosion" é um termo melhor para "explosão".
"Have you heard about" é uma expressão mais natural no contexto deduzido por mim.
"Wanted"= queria. "Wanna"= quer.
Sugiro fazer uma busca no canto superior da tela sobre "rob" x "steal"/ "want" x "wanna". Este assunto encontra-se explicado no fórum.