Correção de Texto: Two stages of a person’s life

Two stages of a person’s life

When you are a child you see the world completly right. Your parents are perfect, you like the police close to protect you, the school teacher is always right, etc. However, when you achive the teens you starts to see the wrong things and everythings seems to be wrong. Your parents do not understand you, you avoid the police in order to not be , the school teacher is not fair, etc.

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you avoid the police in order to not be
... in order not to be... ainda assim faltou uma continuação aqui.
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draylson escreveu:Two stages of a person’s life

When you are a child, you see the world completly rightdifferent. Your parents are perfect, you like to have the police close to protect you, the school teacher is always right, etc. However, when you are in your teens you starts to see all the things around you in a different way the wrong things and everythings seems to be wrong. Your parents do not understand you, you avoid the police in order to not not to be...arrested, punished, ??? , the school teacher is not as fair as she used to be not fair, etc.
PPAULO 6 47 1.1k
You avoid police, because you might think (because you assume they...) they are intimidating/you might think they are out there to get you!

You might avoid police, because you might have a perceived feeling of lack of justice and equal rights on their part.


You might avoid police, because you may or may not have a perceived thinking of the police´s job, that is, you may think that they are out there just to bust people.


And other ways.
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Notice the use of words "might", "perceived" etc, so you don´t think I am being biased towards A or B. Indeed, we are talking about (problable) perceptions at that age.
Hey guys,

I'm sorry. I forgot to complete the sentence about the police. I was thinking something about to be caught doing something illegal.

By the way, thanks a lot!
PPAULO 6 47 1.1k
You avoid police, because you might think they are out there to get you!

Você evita a polícia, porque você deve/pode pensar que ela está aí pra te pegar (que ela está atrás de você).
[nessa fase/idade de sua vida]

Aqui tanto poderia ser por algo que você fez de errado, como por alguma alguma possível percepção de que eles são, de certa forma, algozes de sua classe -adolescente/pobre/negro/minoria etc.
Ou até que eles poderiam lhe pegar aleatoriamente, você sabe, pensamento de adolescente, etc.
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