Correção de Texto : "What if toys could talk"

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Imagine how it would be if toys could talk. If you stop to think about it, toys are part of everyone's life in some moment. In fact, some of us use to play with toys even after we are grown men. This being, what kind of thing would your toys be able to tell about you?
Certainly, toys would be good advisers, if we consider that they are with us in our inner moments, or at least it happens when we are children. On the other hand, our behavior in relation to the toys would change, once we would see them closer to us, and not as objects.
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If you (stop to) think about it, toys are part of everyone's life at some moment (in life).

*in brackets, it´s optional. In fact, I would leave out "stop to".

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In fact, some of us use to play with toys even after we are grown ups.

Let´s not be sexists, what about grown women? so, grow ups (adultos) would be better here.
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Certainly, toys would be good companions and in a way would somehow provide comfort, guidance and inspiration when we are in need. Like the imaginary friends that many children have, even if they know that they aren´t real.


On the other hand, our behavior would change and we would be a lot more sympathetic towards toys, once we could seem them in a more friendlier way, and not only as objects.


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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Imaginary_friend
Thanks a lot PPAULO,for your contribution. :D :D
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You are welcome, chummy. That´s what fellow learner friends are for.