Correção de texto "Who are the inventors?"

Olá pessoal, é o seguinte, eu sabia escrever em inglês, porém fiquem sem praticar por um tempo e agora tive que fazer um trabalho, fiquei com muitas duvidas, gostaria que alguém corrigisse a gramática e etc. Thanks!!!

Who are the inventors? What do they have that others haven’t? Who motivates them? These are questions that don’t have an exact answer.
Among all the people who inhabited the earth, approximately only 0.00001% had a talent for creating something new and useful.
These creations were much more than an evolution for our standard of living, it influenced the distribution of population, caused changes in the political and education fields, and so transformed the world.
We usually think that Inventors are valued and recognized for their genius.
A detailed study about lives of inventors reveals that in most, they possess qualities that are rarely combined in one individual, optimism,, persistence, a good perception of problems, extreme independence and conviction that everything they done can be improved.
The American inventor Le Forest said that he found difficult to work "under conditions that weren’t fully independent.”
Observe, ask, imagine, are these the secret for invent? Apparently, what motivates the inventors in general isn’t the goal to win money, but the challenge. We have the mistaken idea that inventors are engaged in solving the problems of the society, when actually the inventions create necessary that had never been experienced before.
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Avatar do usuário Donay Mendonça 49025 21 73 1137
Cakau,

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Who are the inventors? What do they have that others don't? Who motivates them? These are questions that don’t have an exact answer.
Among all the people who inhabited the earth, approximately only 0.00001% had a talent for creating something new and useful.
These creations were much more than an evolution for our standard of living, they influenced the distribution of population, caused changes in the political and education fields, and so transformed the world.
We usually think that Inventors are valued and recognized for their genius.
A detailed study about lives of inventors reveals that in most, they possess qualities that are rarely combined in one individual, optimism, persistence, a good perception of problems, extreme independence and conviction that everything they do can be improved.
The American inventor Le Forest said that he found it difficult to work "under conditions that weren’t fully independent.”
Observing, asking, imagining, are these the secrets to inventing? Apparently, what motivates inventors in general isn’t the goal to win money, but the challenge. We have the wrong idea that inventors are engaged in solving the problems of society, when actually inventions create what is necessary that had never been experienced before.
Avatar do usuário w.slayman 110
[quote="donay mendonça"]Cakau,

Algumas sugestões de melhoria para o seu texto, que poderão ser complementadas por outros colaboradores.

If I may I would like to suggest that the post be written as a paragraph rather than seven independent sentences. Cakau and Donay, what do you think about the following reorganization.

"Who are the inventors? What do they have that others don't? Who motivates them? These are questions that don’t have an exact answer. Among all the people who inhabited the earth, approximately only 0.00001% had a talent for creating something new and useful. These creations were much more than an evolution for our standard of living, they influenced the distribution of population, caused changes in the political and education fields, and so transformed the world. We usually think that Inventors are valued and recognized for their genius. A detailed study about lives of inventors reveals that in most, they possess qualities that are rarely combined in one individual, optimism, persistence, a good perception of problems, extreme independence and conviction that everything they do can be improved. The American inventor Le Forest said that he found it difficult to work "under conditions that weren’t fully independent.” Observing, asking, imagining, are these the secrets to inventing? Apparently, what motivates inventors in general isn’t the goal to win money, but the challenge. We have the wrong idea that inventors are engaged in solving the problems of society, when actually inventions create what is necessary that had never been experienced before."
Avatar do usuário Donay Mendonça 49025 21 73 1137
Bill,

I think it's great. Thank you for posting.


Keep up the good work!