Correção de texto: Why do you want to speak English?
- Filipe Hudson
- Localização: São Paulo, Brazil
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Olá Pessoal, gostaria que pudessem corrigir este texto que escrevi. Estou começando a escrever em Inglês e gostaria muito das dicas pra melhorar. Desde já agradeço!!!
Why I want to speak English? Well, that's a long story.
Since I was a little kid, I liked to pretend that I was an american actor in interviews, (I didn't speak English yet, so I was a child speaking a weird language that didn't exist).
At that time I used to study with old English books from school and I only knew the meaning of many words, but I didn't know how pronounce them and use the correct grammar.
Now, about two years, I've been studying English and learning how to pronounce and use grammar. I like to study languages and I'm learning English because I want to live in the U.S.A, but it's more than this, English is an International Language, almost the whole world speaks English. So, it's not just about improving my resumé, it's about learning new cultures and see the world in a different point of view.
That's all!
Why I want to speak English? Well, that's a long story.
Since I was a little kid, I liked to pretend that I was an american actor in interviews, (I didn't speak English yet, so I was a child speaking a weird language that didn't exist).
At that time I used to study with old English books from school and I only knew the meaning of many words, but I didn't know how pronounce them and use the correct grammar.
Now, about two years, I've been studying English and learning how to pronounce and use grammar. I like to study languages and I'm learning English because I want to live in the U.S.A, but it's more than this, English is an International Language, almost the whole world speaks English. So, it's not just about improving my resumé, it's about learning new cultures and see the world in a different point of view.
That's all!
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- Donay Mendonça
- Professor de inglês com 20 anos de experiência.
- Localização: Morrinhos - Goiás
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Why do I want to speak English? Well, that's a long story.
When I was a little kid, I liked to pretend that I was an American actor in interviews, (I couldn't speak English yet, so I was a child speaking a weird language that didn't exist).
At that time, I used to study with old English books from school and I knew the meaning of many words, but I didn't know how to pronounce them and use them correctly.
I've been studying English for two years and learning how to pronounce and use grammar. I like to study languages and I'm learning English because I want to live in the U.S.A, but it's more than this, English is an International Language, almost the whole world speaks English. So, it's not just about improving my resumé, it's about learning new cultures and see the world in a different point of view.
- Filipe Hudson
- Localização: São Paulo, Brazil
- Membro desde: 28 Set 2012, 16:36
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Brigadão Donay!!!
Isso com certeza deixou o texto mais claro e limpo.
Só mais uma pergunta.....havia muito erro gramatical no texto? OU a correção foi pra dar uma "limpada" pra deixar mais claro a ideia do texto?
Muito obrigado novamente.
Isso com certeza deixou o texto mais claro e limpo.
Só mais uma pergunta.....havia muito erro gramatical no texto? OU a correção foi pra dar uma "limpada" pra deixar mais claro a ideia do texto?
Muito obrigado novamente.
- Donay Mendonça
- Professor de inglês com 20 anos de experiência.
- Localização: Morrinhos - Goiás
- Membro desde: 15 Abr 2008, 00:47
- Perfil · 69.3k Pontos · 28.8k Mensagens
A correção serviu para dar uma limpada e deixar mais claro.Só mais uma pergunta.....havia muito erro gramatical no texto? OU a correção foi pra dar uma "limpada" pra deixar mais claro a ideia do texto?
