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Today, women have almost the same rights as men. It’s ‘almost’ because we’re so prejudiced, so limited. We cannot see what is in front of us, on our faces. Women have the same rights, the same duties as us.
A long time ago, the man was the one who had a job and earned money to support his family. At that time, only the man was in charge of the family. The woman always had to put up with the man. Her tasks were: do the dishes, do the laundry, tidy up the house and etc. They actually were maids. But today everything is different. Women have their own job, their own money, their own life. Women became more independent. They share the housework with their husbands, share the bills and responsibilities too.