Correção de texto "Women's liberation" [en>en]
- bruno.kreutz
- Localização: São Leopoldo - Rio Grande do Sul
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Today women almost have the same rights than the men. It’s ‘almost’ because we’re so prejudiced, so limited. We cannot see what is in front of us, on our faces. The women have the same rights, the same duties than us.
So long ago was the man who had a job and earned money to support his family. At that time the man ordered the family alone. The woman always had to endure the man. Her tasks was do the dishes, do the laundry, tidy up the house and etc. They were really maids.
But today everything is different. The women have their own job, their own money, their own life. The women became more independent. They share the housework with their husband, share the bills and responsibilities too.
So long ago was the man who had a job and earned money to support his family. At that time the man ordered the family alone. The woman always had to endure the man. Her tasks was do the dishes, do the laundry, tidy up the house and etc. They were really maids.
But today everything is different. The women have their own job, their own money, their own life. The women became more independent. They share the housework with their husband, share the bills and responsibilities too.
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- Donay Mendonça
- Professor de inglês com 20 anos de experiência.
- Localização: Morrinhos - Goiás
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Bruno,
Algumas sugestões de melhoria para seu texto:
Today, women have almost the same rights as men. It’s ‘almost’ because we’re so prejudiced, so limited. We cannot see what is in front of us, on our faces. Women have the same rights, the same duties as us.
A long time ago, the man was the one who had a job and earned money to support his family. At that time, only the man was in charge of the family. The woman always had to put up with the man. Her tasks were: do the dishes, do the laundry, tidy up the house and etc. They actually were maids. But today everything is different. Women have their own job, their own money, their own life. Women became more independent. They share the housework with their husbands, share the bills and responsibilities too.
Algumas sugestões de melhoria para seu texto:
Today, women have almost the same rights as men. It’s ‘almost’ because we’re so prejudiced, so limited. We cannot see what is in front of us, on our faces. Women have the same rights, the same duties as us.
A long time ago, the man was the one who had a job and earned money to support his family. At that time, only the man was in charge of the family. The woman always had to put up with the man. Her tasks were: do the dishes, do the laundry, tidy up the house and etc. They actually were maids. But today everything is different. Women have their own job, their own money, their own life. Women became more independent. They share the housework with their husbands, share the bills and responsibilities too.