Correção de texto "Your interests and accomplishments?"

What are your interests and accomplishments? (Are you interested in art, literature, music, sports, other activities? How did you become interested in the activity? How long have you been interested? How much time do you devote to the activity?)

I have interests specially by sports, I use to practice, jiu-jitsu and lifting regularly during the week, at the weekends I to go running with my father, when I have some free time I also use to go longboarding with my friends and in the summer holidays I go surfing. I already won some jiu-jitsu local competitions, when I was younger I used to play chess and I won a lot of of local and states championships playing, I also take part in a national championship. I became interested in sports because my father always encouraged me to practice, always taking me to the competitions and supporting me.
Another activity which I’m interested for is reading, I follow some blogs at the internet, and also read a lot of books and read the papers almost every day, I believe that I’m interested in this because I believe that trough reading we can learn a lot and and I’m always searching for new informations.
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Algumas sugestões de correção:

I have interests specially in sports, I usually practice jiu-jitsu and weightlifting regularly during the week. On the weekends I, go running with my father - when I have some free time I also usually go longboarding with my friends and in the summer holidays I go surfing. I already won some jiu-jitsu local competitions. When I was younger I used to play chess and I won a lot of local and state championships. I also take part in a national championship. I became interested in sports because my father always encouraged me to practice, always taking me to competitions and supporting me.
Another activity which I’m interested in is reading. I follow some blogs on the internet, and also read a lot of books and read the papers almost every day. I believe that I’m interested in this because I believe that through reading we can learn a lot and and I’m always searching for new information.
donay mendonça escreveu:Algumas sugestões de correção:

...I usually practice jiu-jitsu and weightlifting regularly during the week...


weightlifting seria no caso levantamento de pesos não?

eu gostaria apenas de dizer que vou a academia então eu poderia usar: "... I usually practice Jiu-Jitsu and go to the gym regulary during the week..."?
Avatar do usuário Donay Mendonça 49075 21 73 1138
weightlifting seria no caso levantamento de pesos não?


Sim, "weightlifting" é o ''levantamento de peso.''

eu gostaria apenas de dizer que vou a academia então eu poderia usar: "... I usually practice Jiu-Jitsu and go to the gym regulary during the week..."?


Sua frase está correta. "I usually practice Jiu-Jitsu and go to the gym regulary during the week..."