Correção de Textos: The new head coach of Flamengo

Hi folks. Could someone review my writing? Thanks.

So the Flamengo's new coach is Muricy.
I must confess that I don't like the Muricy's method. I think him overly defensive and his teams play a soccer bad to see.
However he is very professional and undoubtedly a winner.
Well, I hope that he be able to turn 2016 better than 2015 to Flamengo fans.

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gian2hard 1 7 51
Hi folks. Could someone please review my writing? Thanks.

So the Flamengo's new coach is Muricy.
I must confess that I don't like the Muricy's method. I think him he is overly defensive, and his team usually play a crummy soccer.
However, he is very professional and undoubtedly a winner.
Well, I hope that he will be able to turn make 2016 a better year better than 2015 to for Flamengo's fans.
Thank you gian2hard. I didn't know the word "crummy".
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