Correção do texto: A stranger in front of my window
A stranger in front of my window
When I saw a delicate silhouette of a tiny person in my curtain, I opened it.
I asked her: Who are you? What are you doing in front of my window?
She said: I lost my memories, can you help me? I just know this address 'cause it's on my phone. — her voice was tired and her clothes were dirty — May you give me a glass of water?
I promptly helped her, then I said: I am worried about you, please, come in!
When I saw a delicate silhouette of a tiny person in my curtain, I opened it.
I asked her: Who are you? What are you doing in front of my window?
She said: I lost my memories, can you help me? I just know this address 'cause it's on my phone. — her voice was tired and her clothes were dirty — May you give me a glass of water?
I promptly helped her, then I said: I am worried about you, please, come in!
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Não tem nada pra corrigir em questão de gramatical, talvez só essa parte "her voice was tired" ficaria melhor se você trocasse por "she sounded tired".