Correção do texto "Chales Chaplin"

Original:
Charles Spencer Chaplin nasceu no dia 16 de abril de 1889, na East Street, Walworth, Londres, Inglaterra. Era filho de Charles Spencer Chaplin Sr. e Hannah Chaplin. Ele foi ator, diretor, produtor, humorista, empresário, escritor, comediante, dançarino, roteirista e músico.
Chaplin foi um dos atores mais famosos da era do cinema mudo. Dentre os filmes protagonizados estão O Circo, Tempos Modernos e A Condessa de Hong Kong. Seu personagem mais famoso foi Carlitos, personagem que denunciava as injustiças sociais.
Teve dois filhos com Lita Grey e foi obrigado, pela justiça, a custear as despesas do filho de Joan Barry até ele completar 21 anos de idade.
Aos 54 anos de idade ele conheceu Oona O’neil, de 17, e se casaram no dia 16 de junho de 1943. Ela lhe deu oito filhos e ficaram juntos até 25 de dezembro de 1997 quando Charles Chaplin morreu de derrame cerebral na Suiça.

Tradução:
Charles Spencer Chaplin was born on April 16, 1889, in East Street, Walworth, London, England. He was the son of Charles Spencer Chaplin Sr. and Hannah Chaplin. He was an actor, director, producer, comedian, entrepreneur, writer, comedian, dancer, screenwriter and musician.
Chaplin was one of the most famous actors of the silent era. Among those favored films are The Circus, Modern Times and A Countess from Hong Kong. His most famous character was Carlitos, a character who denounced social injustice.
He had two sons with Lita Grey and was obliged, for justice, to defray the expenses of the son of Joan Barry until he was 21 years old.
At 54 he met Oona O'Neill, 17, and were married on June 16, 1943. She gave him eight children and remained together until December 25, 1997 when Charles Chaplin died of stroke in Switzerland.
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Teve dois filhos com Lita Grey e foi obrigado, pela justiça, a custear as despesas do filho de Joan Barry até ele completar 21 anos de idade.
Aos 54 anos de idade ele conheceu Oona O’neil, de 17, e se casaram no dia 16 de junho de 1943. Ela lhe deu oito filhos e ficaram juntos até 25 de dezembro de 1997 quando Charles Chaplin morreu de derrame cerebral na Suiça.

Tradução:
Charles Spencer Chaplin was born on April 16, 1889, in East Street, Walworth, London, England.
Charles Spencer Chaplin was born on April 16, 1889, in Walworth, London, England.
(more concise, and perhaps apart of historians, this would do to most people.)


Chaplin was one of the most famous actors of the silent era. His most famous films are The Circus, Modern Times and
A Countess from Hong Kong.


His most famous character was Carlitos, an oppresed (albeit funny) character that denounced social injustice (as part of the movie plots, not openly).




He had two children with Lita Grey and was obliged, for justice, to defray the expenses of the son of Joan Barry until he was 21 years old.
[here, perhaps "he was obliged to support the child until he was 21 years old" would be easier to a basic learner to understand. Your way is not wrong, though.]


At 54 he met Oona O'Neill, 17, and married on June 16, 1943. She gave him eight children and remained together until December 25, 1997 when Charles Chaplin died of a stroke in Switzerland.