Correção do texto em inglês: "Mona Ming"

Feita por Anon, a releitura do quadro Mona Lisa (Leonardo Da Vinci) foi utilizado um meme, chamado Yao Ming, que possui como ponto chave a idéia de sair da rotina e curtir a vida. O rosto da Mona Lisa foi trocado pelo rosto do Yao Ming, juntamente com o plano de fundo, que originalmente era uma paisagem contendo um lago e uma floresta, passando a ser então uma praia. Essas modificações foram feitas com o intuito de expressar a libertação da Mona Lisa, em que a personagem é retirada da vida campestre e inserida em um meio turístico, numa praia aproveitando o que o mundo tem de melhor. As cores predominantes na imagem são azul escuro, azul claro, verde, branco e preto.

By Anon, the rereading of picture Mona Lisa (Leonardo Da Vinci) was utilized a meme, called Yao Ming, that has as point key the idea of exit of routine and the life. The face of Mona Lisa was exchanged of Yao Ming, together with the plan of background, that originally was a landscape containing a lake and a forest, passing the be then a beach. Those modifications were made witch the aim of express the release of Mona Lisa, in that the character it is withdrawal of life rural and inserted in a medium tourist , a beach advantage the that the world has of better. The colors predominant in image are dark blue, light blue, green, white and black.
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By Anon, in the rereading of picture Mona Lisa (Leonardo Da Vinci)a meme was utilized , called Yao Ming, that has as point key the idea of exit of routine and the life. The face of Mona Lisa was exchanged of Yao Ming, together with the plan of background, that originally was a landscape containing a lake and a forest, passing the be then a beach. Those modifications were made with the aim of expressing the release of Mona Lisa, in that the character it is withdrawal of life rural and inserted in a medium tourist, a beach advantage that the world has best to offer. The predominant colors in image are dark blue, light blue, green, white and black.
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personaly I'd change this bit: a meme was utilized , called Yao Ming.

I'd write this way: a "internet rage-face based on ex-Basketball star, Yao Ming, was utilized"


cheers.