Correção do texto em inglês: Some Brazilian problems
Some brazilian problems
Although Brazil have been improved its social condition, there are a lot of problems that still remain: unemployment, violence, crime, polution, lack of health, poor education, social inequality, etc. However, the problem which more bother me is the poor education. In my opinion, the key to solve the most of this problems is to improve the education in Brazil.
Although Brazil have been improved its social condition, there are a lot of problems that still remain: unemployment, violence, crime, polution, lack of health, poor education, social inequality, etc. However, the problem which more bother me is the poor education. In my opinion, the key to solve the most of this problems is to improve the education in Brazil.
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"the problem which more bother me", should be: "the problem that bothers me the most"
"the problem which more bother me", should be: "the problem that bothers me the most"
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''LOS ANGELES, CALIFORNIA -- Kaiser Permanete is a bad health care system. In a nutshell, the doctors are rude and the services are just a...'' [my3cents.com]Although Brazil has improved its social condition, there are a lot of problems that still remain: unemployment, violence, crime, pollution, a bad health care system, poor education, social inequality, etc. However, the problem which most bothers me is poor education. In my opinion, the key to solve most of these problems is to improve education in Brazil.
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