Correção do texto "I have so many doubts..."

I have so many doubts. I have studied English for years and years, but I know very little. Writing, maybe, is the best thing I know to do. Reading, I have a lot of vocabulary doubts. Speaking, my pronunciation is not good. And listening, the worst, I can't understand almost anything, only the simple songs (like Beatles) and simple dialogues.
When I was eleven, I won a scolarship of an English course, but I am very young and I didn't study very hard. And after one year, I gave up. There is not this school anymore. Many years later, when I was about twenty years, I solved to study English again. I studied in CCAA for a year, but the course was so expensive in the third semester and I decided to change school. So, I went to the Number One, where I studied for one year and half. I stopped, because I began my collegge. There was no time nor money to continue. But years later, I went back to an English school, even still in the collegge, because English is very important, but the school was very weak. So, I quit school. It was Inglês&Cia. Friends of mine study there, they like, but I didn't. So, I changed the English school one more time, I went to the Uptime, where the course is only one year. But, I didn't like the course either. So, because of my experience, I should know more, but I don't know so much. Nowadays, I study by myself. I bought a grammar and downloaded some postcards. I hope it works for me.
For me, these schools where I studied, the best is Number One, and CCAA is also good.

Please, correct my text. Thank you, people.

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Marcio_Farias 1 24 214
Quite a homework you've got there.

Why not break the text down into smaller chunks? That should make it easy for us to correct.
Ok. Thank you.

I have so many doubts. I have studied English for years and years, but I know very little.
Donay Mendonça 23 127 1.7k
The Crazy,

Sugestão:

I have so many questions. I've studied English for many years, but I know very little.


Boa sorte!
Marcio_Farias 1 24 214
The Crazy escreveu:Writing, maybe, is the best thing I know to do.
Writing is perhaps the best thing I know how to do.

Next chunk anyone?
Thank you, guys. The next chunks, please.

Reading, I have a lot of vocabulary doubts. Speaking, my pronunciation is not good. And listening, the worst, I can't understand almost anything, only the simple songs (like Beatles) and simple dialogues.
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Reading: I have a lot of vocabulary questions. Speaking: my pronunciation is not good. And listening: the worst part, I can't understand almost anything, only the simple songs (like Beatles) and simple dialogues.
Thank you, guy. Another chunk, guys, please.

When I was eleven, I won a scolarship of an English course, but I am very young and I didn't study very hard. And after one year, I gave up. There is not this school anymore.
Donay Mendonça 23 127 1.7k
Sugestões:

When I was eleven, I won a free English course, but I was very young and I didn't study very hard. And after one year, I quit/gave up. That school doesn't exist anymore.


Boa sorte!
dlr 1
The Crazy escreveu:I have so many questions. I have studied English for years and years, but I know very little. Writing is perhaps the best thing I know how to do. Reading: I have a lot of questions about vocabulary. Speaking: my pronunciation is not good. And listening: the worst part. I barely understand anything, only the simple songs (like Beatles) and simple dialogues.
When I was eleven, I won a scholarship for an English course, but I was very young and I didn't study very hard. And after one year, I gave up. That school doesn't exist any more. Many years later, when I was about twenty years old, I decided to study English again. I studied at CCAA for a year, but the course was so expensive in the third semester and I decided to change schools. So, I went to Number One, where I studied for one and a half years. I stopped, because I began college. I had no time nor money to continue. But years later, I went back to an English school, even still in the college, because English is very important, but the school was very weak. So, I quit school. It was Inglês&Cia. Friends of mine study there. They like it, but I didn't. So, I changed English schools one more time, I went to Uptime, where the course is only one year. But, I didn't like that course either. So, because of my experience, I should know more, but I don't know very/that much. Nowadays, I study by myself. I bought a grammar book(?) and downloaded some postcards. I hope it works for me.
For me, of/out of these schools where I studied, the best is Number One, and CCAA is also good.
Just so you know... like anyone who learns a new language you might make some mistakes, but you English is still very intelligible.
Marcio_Farias 1 24 214
Por que "They like it, but I didn't" e não "... but I don't"?

Uma vez que o verbo principal está no presente, no presente também deveria estar a continuação. Assim penso eu. Se estiver errado, por favor corrijam-me.
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dlr 1
Talvez porque os amigos dele ainda estudam lá mas não ele.
Friends of mine study there. They like it, but I didn't like it when I was there.
Quantos aos dois últimos comentários, a ideia foi essa mesma. Eu não gostei quando estava lá, mas elas gostam.

Aos outros, obrigado.

Guys, another chunk, please.

Many years later, when I was about twenty years, I solved to study English again. I studied in CCAA for a year, but the course was so expensive in the third semester and I decided to change school.
Flavia.lm 1 10 100
Sugestão:

Many years later, when I was about twenty years old, I decided to study English again. I studied at CCAA for a year, but in the third semester the course was so expensive that I decided to change school.
Thank you, girl.

The next chunk, please.

So, I went to the Number One where I studied for one year and half. I stopped, because I began my collegge. There was no time nor money to continue.
Donay Mendonça 23 127 1.7k
So, I went to Number One where I studied for one year and half. I had to stop because I started college and there was no time or money to continue.
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dlr 1
Tem que ser ou
"...where I studied for a year and a half."
ou
"...where I studied for one and a half years."
Donay,
donay mendonça escreveu:So, I went to Number One where I studied for one year and half. I had to stop because I started college and there was no time or money to continue.
Could we use nor and neither in that case?

So, I went to Number One where I studied for one year and half. I had to stop because I started college and there was nor time neither money to continue.

Thank you in advanced!

Hugs,
Eduardo
Marcio_Farias 1 24 214
Pensei na inversão dos termos...

"... neither time nor money..."
Exactly Marcio!

My bad! It would be neither .. nor..

Hugs,
Eduardo
Donay Mendonça 23 127 1.7k
Dlr,
Tem que ser ou
"...where I studied for a year and a half."
ou
"...where I studied for one and a half years."
Valeu pela dica!

Eduardo,

Sim, "neither...nor..." pode ser usado.


Abraços,
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More one chunk, please. Thanks.

But years later, I went back to an English school, even still in the collegge, because English is very important, but the school was very weak. So, I quit school. It was Inglês&Cia.
Marcio_Farias 1 24 214
But years later, I went back to an English school, even still in the collegge, because English is very important, but the school was very weak. So, I quit school. It was Inglês&Cia.
Aqui precisamos rearranjar partes do texto.

Sugestão:

Yet years later I had gone back to an English language school while I still studied in college. I did so because I thought English very important. The school (Inglês & Cia), however, proved weak. So I quit it.

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