Correção do texto "It all happened last summer..."

It all happened last summer. I was having a good time at the beach, just relaxing and sunbathing. It was a sunny day with no wind. The water was warm, around 27° C. So I decided to go swimming alone. I was going deeper and deeper when I felt something wrong with my legs. Suddenly, I was drowning. My hearth raced and I couldn´t breathe. Soon everything was getting dark and I quickly passed out. I don’t know what happened after it. I only remember I waking up in a hospital.


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It all happened last summer. I was having a good time at the beach, just relaxing and sunbathing. It was a sunny day with no wind. The water was warm, around 27° C. So I decided to go swimming alone. I was going deeper and deeper when I felt there was something wrong with my legs. Suddenly, I was drowning. My heart raced and I couldn´t breathe. Soon everything was getting dark and I quickly passed out. I don’t know what happened after it. I only remember waking up in a hospital.



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